this is one of my older works. forgive the rambling structure, but i think it makes a fairly humorous read.
It was while traveling in the train
I got a chance to use my brain
Small it is, that I concede
even so, I say, take heed
of what I say shall happen whence
you think too much of common sense.
Where has common sense got us?
Why do we make such a fuss
of sticking to reality
and senseless practicality?
Think sometimes with the heart, I say.
Let it take you far away
from concrete jungles thick and dense.
The cages wrought by common sense.
Using it just makes us see,
with less of it how free are we.
For once, just do what u feel is best
and give that common sense a rest.
Very Good. Keep it up with the help of common sense!
ReplyDeleteGreat poems! simply amazing. and this 1 was the best! And I rated it just by common sense!
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